Apparently now that I spend my days editing the writing of kids (you wouldn’t believe the number of times you can correct their, there and they’re in a day), I am no longer capable of editing my own work. That and the fact that auto spell is not always my friend. So for the record – obviously the rain drops looked like rain, what I wanted say was they looked like hail. And I did not try to avoid running in puzzles, but did in fact have to deal with puddles.
And if there are any other mistakes, I blame my poor iPad typing skills and general editing fatigue.